Every now and then I make a movie to showcase on my site. I have not made one in a long time so I took the liberty of making one for a school.


it is showcased at my site www.elypsis-net.com

you can find the movie at http://outerflight.elypsis-net.com

check it out and tell me what you think. Make sure you read the comments on the page to.

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Kick ass. Only a few comments.

1. It looks too much like DBZ. And DBZ = gay.
2. Add at least a bit to the buildings. I know it'd take a long time to do a lot of detail work, but at least add windows or something. They're even all the same color.
3. Between the 2 songs, there's no music, and it seems empty. Either close the gap between the songs, or add some transitional music there.
4. It's fine how it is, but it'd be even better if instead of showing the text you actually said it. Not too hard to manage, either.

Other than that, cool.

By the way, since you're here, I need help using Swift 3D to make that sig with the rotating first letter. Thanks a bunch.

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the music is needed

but the rest of it is great

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on my computer there is no gap between music, it is such a heavy file that it runs slow on old comps.....sorry....try watching it in low quality.


And diable, in order to put winodws in would add another 5 megs to the damn file.....that file is optimized to the max.


what do you need help with in swift 3d diablo...I made the whole city in the movie with swift 3d lol

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I watched it on my computer, which is not old, 2ghz P4, 512 PC2100 RAM, etc.

And there were gaps between the sound.

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My comp isn't old, there's definitely a gap between the first song and second song. And about the windows, it just looks really stupid have a bunch of gray blocks for buildings.

And...I'm just not sure about the whole thang.

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DIE DIABLO.

The buildings are fine as it is. However, Remey Zero needs to go.

Otherwise: I give it sex/10.

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well I have a new dell inspirion and I got it like a month ago. It is maxed out so it romps all ur comps and thats why it plays diffrent on my comp. Thats the downfall with flash is that you never know how it is going to play other people's comps.

Um about the grey bulidings. If I was to add windows to the buildings, the first building scene would have been done by the time the credits would have rolled. Flash MX is meant to handle all that much so don't expect that much graphic wise.

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I bet your Dell doesnt Max out my Rebuilt PC ;) anyways when I pop in my new hard drives I shoul;d be able to sit down and look at this masterpiece you have assembled

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don't expect a masterpiece....but maybe someday something close to it. Note to all this is only like my 3rd full flash movie. It isn't something I have do all the time.


BTW hypedave, I tired to send you an "important" reguarding the front page pm but ur box is full.

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