Rap Thread

[thedevilf]

Im constantly writing rhymes, and to give u guys an experience of my work, I give u a few of my rhymes. If any of u guys have any rhymes that you would like to share, go ahead.

Heres one that I did, inspired off the track "Welcome to atlanta"
Nisko, just my friend, good at rappin and stuff.

Welcome to Atlanta was a track with Jermaine Dupree
Now we got MC's from the windy City
Includin Twista, KAnye, NIsko and me,
This track will break records set by DTP
unique rhymes dished out by every MC,
Big Joe, Big Pun, N.O.R.E
Get cha years open and listen to Me,
From The USA, to Japan, To Germany,

I call this track Welcome to the city of Chi,
where gangstas roam freely and the honeys be fly,
short skirts tight jeans and the city is clean,
black girls, white chicks, and the ones european,
Chi-Fire, Chi-Sox, Chi-bullz and the Hawks,
Chi-Bears, Chi-Cubs served cold on the rocks,
sears tower, lake shore with the view of the sea,
bought to u by these MC's locally.

Enjoy everyone.

[Sandals]

I Can't Stand It I Know You Planned It
But I'm Gonna Set It Straight, This Watergate
I Can't Stand Rocking When I'm In Here
Because Your Crystal Bal Ain't So Crystal Clear
So While You Sit Backand Wonder Why
I Got This Fucking Thorn In My Side
Oh My, It's A Mirage
I'm Tellin' Y'all It's a Sabotage
So Listen Up 'Cause You Can't Say Nothin'
You'll Shut Me Dow With A Push Of Your Button?
But I'm Out And I'm Gone
I'll Tell You Now I Keep It On And On
'Cause What You See You Might Not Get
And We Can Bet So Don't You Get Souped Yet
You're Scheming On A Thing That's A Mirage
I'm Trying To Tell You Now It's Sabotage
Why; Our Backs Are Now Against The Wall
Listen All Of Y'all It's A Sabotage
I Can't Stand It, I Know You Planned It
But I'm Gonna Set It Straight This Watergate
I Can't Stand Rockin' When I'm In This Place
Because I Feel Disgrace Because You're All In My Face
But Make No Mistakes And Switch Up My Channel
I'm Buddy Rich When I Fly Off The Handle
What Could It Be, It's A Miracle
You're Scheming On A Thing; That's Sabotage


Whipped it up really quick like. I'll make billion$.

[thedevilf]

damn nice..

Heres my response

Real gangstas wear trucker hats with wack graffity on them
somebody said you a thung now and maybe they were right,
The sun is more than offwhite
how come the world isnt tinted orange.
could I arrange for this to happen,
or would you rather keep it bland?
you have to have style to feel you,
anything besides hip-hop's the easy way out,
So I guess I'm the one that takes the hard routes,
In this life of mine, life of crime

WRITTEN BY NISKO.

[Diablo]

You fail. Moved to General Entertainment, because that's where music stuff goes.

[thedevilf]

oh my bad, didnt think about it.

Diablo dont know how to rap

[Diablo]

I don't know how to rap, and I don't want to know how to rap, because I'm not black and I wasn't raised in the inner city or I never really had a hard life, and that seems to be what rap is all about: complaining about how much shit you've done to get through life, how many caps you've popped, and how you keep it real because you grew up in inner city Chicago. To be a rapper you had to have a rough childhood, and I didn't/don't.

Plus rap sucks, either choose music or bad poetry, don't fuse them together to end up with bad poetry with a beat.